literature

just one little girl

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she dances at midnight
with no one around
bare feet on the hardwood
so she wont make a sound

the pitter of her feet
as they pound on the floor
makes the dust bunnies applaud
and the angels cry for more

her audience cheers
without making noise
because she carrys herself
with such passion and poise.

Behind closed doors
she dances away
the world is her stage
and her troubles go away

she needs to break free
and show the whole world
that there is so much talent
in just one little girl...
I dont know, going from a prompt of ballet

Ehh, its okay, Not sure how i feel about it.
The story was sorta about a girl who dances behind closed doors, who longs to be on stage, but does not have the confidence to do it. And nobody realizes how much talent she actually has, and they underestamate her because she is just another little girl to them.

Kinda weird.. Oh well, i needed to write something
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Iambadatdrawing's avatar
Very cool! Despite your intention for this to be a straight forward story, I can see it being interpreted metaphoricly quite easily. Cool stuff, eh.